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Critiques
I like the colors, however, I think if you add a little more emphasizing shadows/light, it can make it seem a bit more lively and grungier. Maybe adding splotches of bruises, freckles, dirt, etc, will help add to it. But that's just me, I could be wrong. ^_^;;
Around the neck, where the blood is seeping, could have a reddish color, like tender skin. It'll add more to the effect of the iron digging into his skin.
The hair could use a little work, shading and lighting-wise. The way it's lit, with the bold line-art, makes it look almost "embedded" or "buttonized". I'm unsure how else to describe it. It's not bad, but I think some more strands will help it look better.
Overall, a good drawing; melikes it. :3 I just love his eyes and the tears add such an effect on it. Really great work. Keep it up. :3
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